英语高分背诵 应用文写作2007年真题及范文

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Directions:

Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address. (10 points)

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本题目要求考生写一封“建议信”。“给大学的图书馆写一封信,建议他们改进服务。你的建议信不少于100个单词。要清楚地写在答题卡2上面。不要在信的结尾写出你的姓名,可使用‘李明’代替。不要写出地址(10)

结合题目要求,题目要求考生明确地理解该信是一封建议信。其信的目的是“建议”,而原因是图书馆的服务有待改进。这一年的小作文题目只给出了一个情景,而不同于前两年给出详细的要求,所以考生要着力在信件的中间段上下功夫。换言之,这封信其实考查了考生在大学生活中的观察力与洞悉力。在下面的范文中,考生要将自己的使用图书馆的经历与之相结合。

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信头的常用句式:

1. I'd like to suggest that

  我想建议……

2. May I suggest that you…?

  或许我能建议您……?

3. My suggestions are as follows.

  我的建议如下所述。

4. It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on…

  能给您就……提供建议我很高兴。

5. If you could take what I suggest seriously, you would…

  如果您能认真考虑我的建议,您会……。

6. When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you can…

  谈到这种情况,我建议您能够……。

信尾的常用句式:

1. I would be ready to discuss this matter to further details.

  我随时愿意进一步和您讨论此事。

2. Finally, I would like to remind you of taking my suggestions seriously.

  最后,我想要提醒您认真考虑我的建议。

3. Please let me have your answer within / before (a date) as to your decision on this matter.

请于……之前,将您对这件事情的决定告知我。

4. Please remember you should make your own final decision.

请记住您应该自己做最终的决定。

5. No matter what you determine to do, I would side with you.

不管你决定如何,我都会支持你

                        Jan 20th, 2007

Dear Sir/Madam,

    I am a student in this university who regularly comes to the library to spend my spare time. Generally speaking, the service you offer here is quite good; however, I have some suggestions for you to adopt. And I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions into consideration.

    To begin with, will you please prolong the time for reading? In the daytime, most of the students are having classes, so they can’t come to the library. Moreover, some of the books on shelves are out of date. If you are so kind as to provide us some books such as the latest magazines, we will be greatly honored.

    I really wish to have a more comfortable library. Thank you for your time and consideration.

 

                     Yours faithfully,

                        Li Ming

                      (134 words)

 

 

 

    首段表明写信人的身份、写信目的、写信背景。请注意该段尾句起到引出下文的作用。

 

 

 

 

    中间段列举出写信人的两个建议。“To begin with”与“Moreover”是本段以列举法展开的两个典型的关联短语。列举法在考研英语大作文中同样适用。

 

    再一次表达自己美好的愿望,并对对方表示感谢。

 

 

 

 

 

 

1. spare [spZE] adj. 剩余的,备用的,空闲的 v. 让给,抽出(时间);饶恕;保留,节省

Tod did the work to spare you the trouble.

陶德做了那件事使你免去麻烦。

2. adopt [ ə'dɔpt ] v. 采用,收养,接受

  The organization adopted his proposal.

  这个组织采纳了他的建议。

3. appreciation [ ə,pri:ʃi'eiʃən ] n. 赏识,鉴识,感激

That manager was frustrated by the lack of appreciation shown of his task.

那位经理因工作得不到赏识而灰心丧气

4. prolong [ prə'lɔŋ ] v. 延长,拖延

  No one can prolong the life, but widen it.

没有人能延伸生命的长度,但可以决定生命的宽度。 

5. honor [ 'ɔnə ]  n. 荣誉,头衔,信用 v. 尊敬,授予荣誉

  It is my great honor to attend this conference.

  我十分荣幸出席这次会议。

They would honor you by themselves.

他们会亲自表达对您的敬意。

 

亲爱的先生/女士,

我是本大学学生,经常利用业余时间来图书馆看书。总地来讲,图书馆的服务很好。但是我还是有些建议需要您们采纳。如果您们能够考虑我的建议,我会十分感谢。

首先,您们能否将图书馆的开放时间延长?因为白天同学们都有课,所以不能来借阅。另外,图书馆书架上面的一些书籍过时了。如果您能够提供一些最新的杂志,我们会感到很荣幸的。

我非常希望能够有一个舒适的图书馆。非常感谢您们对我的建议的考虑。

 

                                                    真诚的,

                                                     李明

原句:In the daytime, most of the students are having classes, so they can’t come to the library.

病句:Because in the daytime, most of the students are having classes, so they can’t come to the library.

分析:这句话出现在正文的第二段,是作者表达的建议理由。这是一个并列句,由“so”连接。但是在写作中,很多考生会把该句句首加上“because”。在英语中,“because”与“so”是不能连用的。

原句:I am a student in this university who regularly comes to the library to spend my spare time.

活用:I, the undergraduate in this university, enjoy the use of our library during my spare time.

原句:If you are so kind as to provide us some books such as the latest magazines, we will be greatly honored.

活用:It would be a great honor for us to capture various latest magazines offered here.

 

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